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Again, great. I don't think it matched up to your first, but in saying that, I still really enjoyed it, and I trust myself in thinking you are creating a very enjoyable series.
You point out flaws in the general Christian and twist it into something light-hearted, and that is never easy to do. I found the sound in this one to be quieter than your previous installment, though... I'm not sure why that is.

I will add you to my Favourite list, because I'd really like to be informed when you release flashes :)

-Mesmic

Cambo responds:

I'm always going to be caught between trying to please the guys who liked the first one and guys who want to see some development, so I try not to let it phase me. I've written 4 episodes all on the same day, so they're all just arbitrary which one was first and second and so on. But whatever, if you're enjoying it I'm not going to make comparisons.

I'll let you know when the next one comes out.

:O

YOU WERE ALLOWED TO DO THAT IN SCHOOL?!
You lucky sonuva...

-Mesmic

Shortastic.

I love when people can do movies as short like this and pull it off, and you definitely pulled it off.
Great job.

-Mesmic

Cambo responds:

Cooltastic! Glad you enjoyed it. Great review.

-Cameron

Haha.

Great! Really well done.
The only thing I would say is, when they're fighting at the start, you can tell you looped it as it jumps. Apart from that, I really liked it. Definitely worth protecting.

-Mesmic

Red-Wolf responds:

thanks man! see im a lazy guy... so I use a lot of loops... haha.

~Red Wolf

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I'm glad you've been experimenting with flash,
but personally it's something I wouldn't have submitted onto NG. Maybe just put it in an online portfolio to build on, maybe.
For two days, it was quite good.
Hopefully now you can use the skills you've learned to build proper animations with proper storylines.

-Mesmic.

Napalmed responds:

Thanks for the compliment, and I will try and make a half-decent animation now =p. Maybe you're right about submitting it to NG, but I wanted to see if people thought it was any good.

Hahaha :]

I've yet to find a Press Start episode I don't like.

Hmm.

I like what you've done. You really have the whole stop-motion thing done. But you have to consider light/surroundings. For example, the paper underneath the clay kept moving.
I know you were aiming for a silent movie, but you could have made this better with sound.
More props will make your movie more interesting.
Graphics: Not much I can say about this, as it's not a flash.
Style: I gave a 6, because it's not something you see everyday on NG
Sound: 0, because, well, there was none.
Violence: 4, because of the spears.
Interactivity: 2, a choice of replay.
Humor: 4, his fall made for a giggle.
Overall: 3, because of my later critique.

I hope to see more from you, with more improvements.

-Mesmic.

bd1000 responds:

I will consider adding sound,but I think I should stick to silence for now.

Lolz.

I laughed.
It was quite funny.

The only thing I would say is, nothing is really happening. But, as you say 'Episode 1', I expect you will be making many more. I'm voting to protect this installment so I can see where things go from here.

-Mesmic

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