Mesmic's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[I Am Your Father (Bitch)]

Haha.

Great! Really well done.
The only thing I would say is, when they're fighting at the start, you can tell you looped it as it jumps. Apart from that, I really liked it. Definitely worth protecting.

-Mesmic

Red-Wolf responds:

thanks man! see im a lazy guy... so I use a lot of loops... haha.

~Red Wolf

[-All Together Now-]

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I'm glad you've been experimenting with flash,
but personally it's something I wouldn't have submitted onto NG. Maybe just put it in an online portfolio to build on, maybe.
For two days, it was quite good.
Hopefully now you can use the skills you've learned to build proper animations with proper storylines.

-Mesmic.

Napalmed responds:

Thanks for the compliment, and I will try and make a half-decent animation now =p. Maybe you're right about submitting it to NG, but I wanted to see if people thought it was any good.

[.:Clay life 1:.]

Hmm.

I like what you've done. You really have the whole stop-motion thing done. But you have to consider light/surroundings. For example, the paper underneath the clay kept moving.
I know you were aiming for a silent movie, but you could have made this better with sound.
More props will make your movie more interesting.
Graphics: Not much I can say about this, as it's not a flash.
Style: I gave a 6, because it's not something you see everyday on NG
Sound: 0, because, well, there was none.
Violence: 4, because of the spears.
Interactivity: 2, a choice of replay.
Humor: 4, his fall made for a giggle.
Overall: 3, because of my later critique.

I hope to see more from you, with more improvements.

-Mesmic.

bd1000 responds:

I will consider adding sound,but I think I should stick to silence for now.